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What a Snafu

This happens when you have no extra time- There you stand in the queue Patiently, you wait There’re two ahead of you-- You’re so close to the gate You watch as time runs out Tick tock…., you’re in a crunch Up goes the sign, “Out to Lunch” Now, your face wears this pout Oh! What a snafu! ~*~

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Donna Jones

Date: 4/13/2013 6:43:00 AM

Annalise congratulations on this very cute win...Donna

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2013 10:46:00 AM

Hi sweet Annalise, Congratulations with your fun winning grook ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/10/2013 4:49:00 AM

Don't you just HATE that?...Great rhyme scheme and congrats my friend - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2013 2:16:00 PM

Congrats on your win...Sara

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/8/2013 1:09:00 PM

Lovely write,Annalise...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,great friend..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/8/2013 12:47:00 PM

So aggravating. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/8/2013 8:07:00 AM

many congratulations Annalise xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2013 6:50:00 AM

We have all been there in those lines..Now people text and it helps the time pass..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging.Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/23/2013 2:41:00 PM

Excellent piece... you have written a wonderful piece... xxx Michael

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 3/20/2013 12:19:00 PM

It is really good. You don't waste words

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/18/2013 11:31:00 AM

you bring the situation to life,, love this

Len Gasun

Date: 3/18/2013 2:21:00 AM

This is a great entry for the contest my dear friend Annalise! A brilliant idea written from the theme and this is a winner for me. Good luck and best wishes! Thank you so much for sharing and your warmth congratulatory comment on my win. My hearty congratulations also in all your wins. Have a blessed and wonderful day! love and hugs, Leonora