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What a Snafu

This happens when you have no extra time-
There you stand in the queue
Patiently, you wait
There’re two ahead of you--
You’re so close to the gate
You watch as time runs out
Tick tock…., you’re in a crunch
Up goes the sign, “Out to Lunch”
Now, your face wears this pout
Oh! What a snafu!
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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Donna Jones Date: 4/13/2013 6:43:00 AM Annalise congratulations on this very cute win...Donna Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/11/2013 10:46:00 AM Hi sweet Annalise, Congratulations with your fun winning grook ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 4/10/2013 4:49:00 AM Don't you just HATE that?...Great rhyme scheme and congrats my friend - Tim Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/8/2013 2:16:00 PM Congrats on your win...Sara Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 4/8/2013 1:09:00 PM Lovely write,Annalise...Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,great friend.. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/8/2013 12:47:00 PM So aggravating. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/8/2013 8:07:00 AM many congratulations Annalise xx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/24/2013 6:50:00 AM We have all been there in those lines..Now people text and it helps the time pass..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always encouraging.Sara Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 3/23/2013 2:41:00 PM Excellent piece... you have written a wonderful piece... xxx Michael Login to Reply

Honesty Oimbo Date: 3/20/2013 12:19:00 PM It is really good. You don't waste words Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/18/2013 11:31:00 AM you bring the situation to life,, love this Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 3/18/2013 2:21:00 AM This is a great entry for the contest my dear friend Annalise! A brilliant idea written from the theme and this is a winner for me. Good luck and best wishes! Thank you so much for sharing and your warmth congratulatory comment on my win. My hearty congratulations also in all your wins. Have a blessed and wonderful day! love and hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

... Gigno Date: 3/16/2013 9:23:00 PM !!! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/16/2013 6:05:00 PM I especialy hate this when waiting to get on a ferrie and your like three cars away from getting on. Grrrrr good poem. Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 3/16/2013 8:52:00 AM hahaha.. yes, I hate that, too! great write. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/14/2013 9:25:00 AM nice write Annalise...best wishes Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2013 11:05:00 PM This is GREAT GROOK, Annalise. A sure winner. I hate when this happens too. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2013 7:29:00 AM I recognize myself in your poem Annalise. - Well written :) :) - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 3/13/2013 7:08:00 AM Been there... done that! LOL Most everyone can relate to this one! Loved it and you... Jack xox Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/13/2013 1:53:00 AM Great poem. Happy to note this poem. Tfs Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 3/11/2013 8:10:00 PM Oh yes......makes ya wanna say snafu!!!! Great poem Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/11/2013 3:01:00 PM lol, so glad you posted this one, my friend Login to Reply