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What a relaxing moment

How elegant of the rain
Of its smells and transparency 
Of its  sounds rhymed spring 

Even the wind conspires 
Of absence to urge
Nor others for disturbance 

The trees stand over there quietly 
And the people are driving slowly 
Or walking carefully

Even birds are somewhere hiding 
To offer the moment to the rain 
Sounds as a clock ticking 

By the windows, we are 
And counting for the ticking
And wondering how many Tickles 
To lure the sun smiling at us 

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Date: 3/11/2025 7:27:00 AM
Even the drone of a steady rain can relax the nerves. Nice
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 3/11/2025 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Tom for your encouraging words.I really appreciate your kindness

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