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What a relaxing moment

How elegant of the rain Of its smells and transparency Of its sounds rhymed spring Even the wind conspires Of absence to urge Nor others for disturbance The trees stand over there quietly And the people are driving slowly Or walking carefully Even birds are somewhere hiding To offer the moment to the rain Sounds as a clock ticking By the windows, we are And counting for the ticking And wondering how many Tickles To lure the sun smiling at us

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Date: 3/11/2025 7:27:00 AM
Even the drone of a steady rain can relax the nerves. Nice
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 3/11/2025 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Tom for your encouraging words.I really appreciate your kindness

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