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What a Mess We Made

the love suffocates us from floor to ceiling i feel tension everywhere i welcome the distraction it combats the pain he touches my face then the love suffocates us i inhale his exhale the red room is destroyed from floor to ceiling and for several hours in a daze his weakness we're desperate i'm anxious i feel tension everywhere i scream that i trust him to combat his pain he touches my face again, destruction such passion from floor to ceiling what a mess we made i inhale his exhale still, in a daze the love suffocates us

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Date: 8/24/2016 3:36:00 AM
What a mess. this is very well written.
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Date: 7/28/2016 7:24:00 PM
Beautiful and sensual.
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