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What a Day

Strange wind's blowin' as dust fills my eyes, Turning and walking to an unknown way' Pressing my sore eyes and then re-open them, Oh!what a day! Wide circles of my cherished experience breaks, My trusted allies and enemies vanish, Mysterious voices announce to the world, What a day! I see the hidden side of the moon, The dying man's eyes transfers to mine, The molecule splits and the crow croaks, Oh!what a day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2024 7:46:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/8/2013 1:56:00 PM
Ceciliah :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2012 7:10:00 AM
This is good! You explained what you meant really well. I liked the poem!
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