What a Day

Sue’s bad hair day, ripped dress, tight shoes, drop rings,
parents share our cabs, fluff vows,
cold lunch, wonderful night

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2011 1:35:00 PM

Dear Jack, thanks for your comments. Please let me know when you post some new work, okay? Your audience is waiting <3. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2011 4:31:00 AM

Thanks for the entry, jack

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/23/2011 1:48:00 AM

Dear Jack, just saw that it will be a bit difficult als all languages are connected. Whenever you see a capital letter it means that this is a new sentence. Thank you for your wishes on my detective story. Have to write much more yet!...:) Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/23/2011 1:45:00 AM

Dear Jack, here is my Tanka for you: What Love means / Was Liebe bedeutet / Que el amor significa (Tanka) Love a blooming rose Always flowering in us And nourished by faith A never ending story A safe heaven for our soul Liebe eine blühende Rose Sie blüht immer in uns Genährt durch Vertrauen Eine unendliche Geschichte Zuflucht für unsere Seele El amor es una rosa Floreciendo en nosotros Alimentados por la confianza Una historia sin fin Refugio de nuestra alma

James Fraser

Date: 3/22/2011 11:18:00 AM

Oooo the ending, nice one Jack....:)

George Aul

Date: 3/22/2011 11:04:00 AM

I like, I like.............George

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/22/2011 9:48:00 AM

Hi Jack, thank your for your comments! Great that you are learning some word in German and Spanish! I will read some poems in front of an audience on Sunday 27th in a Café here. There are also musicians and actors present. Will comment on that! Yes, my right arm and hand are still very painful. Hope it will be better soon! Have a great week ahead! Love, Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/22/2011 6:47:00 AM

At least a wonderful night, Jack! Hahaha! Enjoyed your Kimo this sunny afternoon! Ant thank you for your friendly comments! Jack, your friend Gert:)