What a Birthday Is

You speak yelling
What’s a birthday?
But a cake and candles
You ridicule it heartlessly
You don’t understand
You never did truly appreciate 
What we did
You hurt us 
You did hurt us
With your thrashing words
With your careless thoughts
I thought a birthday 
Is not that at all 
It is the moment shared by many 
For that person 
It is the pleasure tasted by family 
For that person 
For only that person 
I thought again 
I await that moment each year
Knowing there is my family 
Celebrating that moment for me 
Blowing the candles 
Making a wish 
Closing my eyes with admire
It was all created joy 
It was all a living episode of life
It connected laughs 
Pictured smiles
Made a difference 
But now 
That I know there’s no one
There’s no reunion 
No joined hearts and blissful souls
No treasured times
Or valued hours
So that it leaves me 
To forget
What a birthday is…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/14/2010 10:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Louzana. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 4:09:00 PM
sad thoughts at the end, thoroughly enjoyed the poem however
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