What Do You See

shattered to pieces a broken mirror reflects bits of honesty By David Kavanagh

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/20/2020 8:50:00 AM

Without light the mirror is powerless to reflect. Sometimes truth is discovered within the darkness. The mirror only offers a glimpse of the truth.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/20/2020 10:57:00 AM

Fair point Richard but not the one I was making. The mirror will always reflect what it sees weather broken or intact unlike people who will distort the truth for their own corrupt reasons hence the mirror is honest to itself cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/18/2020 5:36:00 PM

Mirror , Mirror on the Wall Who is the most honest of them all That once was whole but has become a mosaic collage on refection With 7 year's of bad luck to follow If you are superstitious David

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/19/2020 2:26:00 AM

Thanks Christopher the broken mirror will always reflect back what it sees some people think that’s corrupted, far from it, cheers David

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/18/2020 10:11:00 AM

Purity is raped / by racism character / no heaven in peace.....

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/18/2020 10:58:00 AM

Erm ok. The mirror is not tainted Misshapen or corrupt, it’s broken but still retains it’s integrity. Cheers David