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Beauty calls and I must go What? I didn't say beauty I said duty Oh! So far up until now It had been a Great day

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William Kershaw

Date: 8/20/2009 5:55:00 PM

Sara, enjoying beauty is everyones duty. Hope your day returns to greatness. Your kind comments on my stuff always make my day wonderful. Love, Will

Daver Austin

Date: 8/20/2009 2:11:00 PM

I'll take beauty every time. Clever. Got a kick out of this one. Love, daver

Orphani ..........O

Date: 8/20/2009 12:28:00 PM

with all your gracious words i plant a garden that will forever bloom iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

P Sheart

Date: 8/20/2009 8:41:00 AM

Very thought provoking Sara. Love it! Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 8/20/2009 7:58:00 AM

must not be to humorous for the person that has to go! good one Sara!

Orphani ..........O

Date: 8/20/2009 7:13:00 AM

that hurt...o