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Wet Wood

Sunlight peeping through
the shades in the damp, dripping 
wood with rocky path
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Your poem is very evocative! I haven't been in the woods for a while - and wish I will be there again. Life can be a "rocky path".
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September 17, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Nice use of iamgery. You wrote a comment on my blog to check my Soup Mail. There wasn't any from you. Could you send it again? Have a good day. Karen
Chamma Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 3:03 AM
A beautiful Haiku Adeleke...keep up the good work.. Always, Farah
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September 14, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Perfect Haiku and very beautiful too, dear Adeleke. And, thank you for your kind, welcome comments. Lainie
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September 14, 2009 at 12:03 AM
Nice one Adeleke.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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