Wet Things

WET THINGS

after summer rains
wet things like dew-fairies gleam
flitting in the smoke
prancing lightly on the leaves
humming praises in the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 3, 2013 at 10:38 AM
wow! Daver, where have I been :-) missing you... the title is exciting, the poem it'self has a mystic morning view.. I like the fairy gleam... xox~ Linda
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August 27, 2013 at 9:00 AM
Ahh!! I like this one..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
Horsman Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:45 AM
not only an amazing poem but oh so visual...
Maverick Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Dancing lines well done by you Daver i needed a light write this downcast night; fare well Joe..)
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 12:20 AM
HI, Daver, how is it going for you this week? Is it cooling down there? We are having one of our hottest summers ever and it's just fine by me!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:59 PM
A lovely magical poem Daver. I can visualize them doing a rain dance.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Yes, here is that cute one about dew fairies! So nice, Daver.
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August 18, 2013 at 2:40 PM
- Beautifully, tanka Daver !!!! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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