Wet - Septolet

the sprinklers

     on a timer

       nurture

          the earth

sprinklers stop

     just as

         rain starts.







15/07/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:52 PM
This one is really clever. I love the way wet rhymes with septolet and I love the idea behind this one. My favorite of the whole bunch!
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:12 PM
And the ground gives birth, to roses
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