Wet Rain Flows Down

Wet rain flows down her silken face Never showing her true disgrace Water runs quickly on her skin Shedding feelings of what’s within Falling down, learning from her grace She breathes between each flooded taste Horror stricken girl with pink lace Not knowing where water has been Wet rain flows down Rain carries on with its own pace Beads of it gather in its place She never believes that she wins By the steady stream which begins The rain pours, her heart does displace Wet rain flows down
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 11:57 AM
so feel-good seeing you quill rhymes, russell.. this graceful gift ; pensive and touching... i feel the rain dripping down her heart; super my friend!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:45 PM
you are getting better and better at rondeaus, Russell. well, you are my last one to see tonight and I have to get off here!! See ya
Sweetheart Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 3:51 PM
beautiful essence to this stellar write Russel luv .. rain parallels the emotions contained in deep breathtaking lines swelling to crescendo .. most intense poetry my friend ..
Horne Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 12:59 PM
awesome rondeau, my friend
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