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Total  foggy day in this part of  Georgia..
. wet fog enters trees clings upon dry dead leaves droplets water earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/23/2012 2:16:00 PM
lovely haiku, Sara
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:59:00 AM
Yes one can feel the moisture on the leaves and the dripping drops, nicely written, Brenda : )
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:41:00 PM
Sara, earth rejuvenates i bet..lol... lovely image .. I like the fog... creepy ,, in a mysterious way... i guess nature has it all fix.. a very lovely poem.. thank you for sharing your poem,.. always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:36:00 PM
This is really well expressed about fog as it goes among the trees, Sara. You made a very fine haiku
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Date: 1/22/2012 1:14:00 PM
imagery reigns in this creation of poetic art Sara... such an intense descriptive piece ..
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful, Sara! You not only described this image perfectly, but made us realize that even the water droplets from fog can nourish a parched earth. So glad I read this one today! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:34:00 PM
This is truly a fabulous Haiku! I rather enjoyed this poem! I love fog, and wet fog is how it comes usually. Fog just brings a calmness and is mysterious, I just love it! This poem brings me images of this kind of fog I enjoy, a moisture enriched fog, great and refreshing, usually pretty cool to almost cold sometimes! You did very well with this write! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/22/2012 11:20:00 AM
A very good haiku, Sara.
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:05:00 AM
Nice Haiku, Sara. An excellent picture painted with your words. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:51:00 AM
Smile ˜ Sounds Kind Of Like A Gray & Perhaps A Bit Of Gloomy Kind Of Day At Least, If Your Not A Frog Or Some Other Type Of Winters Fog Loving Type Of Creature, My Dear Beautiful Sara ˜ Hahahahaha, But Personally I Love Frogs ˜ My Love, Always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful haiku.Very keen observation of nature by you Sara.
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