Wet Fog Enters Trees

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                                             wet fog enters trees
                                       clings upon dry dead leaves
                                             droplets water earth

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/23/2012 2:16:00 PM

lovely haiku, Sara

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/23/2012 1:59:00 AM

Yes one can feel the moisture on the leaves and the dripping drops, nicely written, Brenda : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2012 8:41:00 PM

Sara, earth rejuvenates i bet..lol... lovely image .. I like the fog... creepy ,, in a mysterious way... i guess nature has it all fix.. a very lovely poem.. thank you for sharing your poem,.. always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2012 8:36:00 PM

This is really well expressed about fog as it goes among the trees, Sara. You made a very fine haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2012 1:14:00 PM

imagery reigns in this creation of poetic art Sara... such an intense descriptive piece ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/22/2012 12:43:00 PM

Beautiful, Sara! You not only described this image perfectly, but made us realize that even the water droplets from fog can nourish a parched earth. So glad I read this one today! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/22/2012 12:34:00 PM

This is truly a fabulous Haiku! I rather enjoyed this poem! I love fog, and wet fog is how it comes usually. Fog just brings a calmness and is mysterious, I just love it! This poem brings me images of this kind of fog I enjoy, a moisture enriched fog, great and refreshing, usually pretty cool to almost cold sometimes! You did very well with this write! Awesome Work!!

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 1/22/2012 11:20:00 AM

A very good haiku, Sara.

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/22/2012 10:05:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Sara. An excellent picture painted with your words. Love, Kim

John Rhinem

Date: 1/22/2012 7:51:00 AM

Smile ˜ Sounds Kind Of Like A Gray & Perhaps A Bit Of Gloomy Kind Of Day At Least, If Your Not A Frog Or Some Other Type Of Winters Fog Loving Type Of Creature, My Dear Beautiful Sara ˜ Hahahahaha, But Personally I Love Frogs ˜ My Love, Always, John!:) ˜