Westward

Wagons packed, gunny sacked Wheat flour, beans, preserves Wild nature sojourning Worn axles, oxen, health Winter weather challenge Wealth aspiring visions Wonder-filled golden hills 5-10-2021 Plieades W Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Ann Foster

Date: 5/14/2021 9:19:00 AM

Great write. I am working on a western and you have set my mood this morning... Excellent... Ann the Iris Ranch

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/14/2021 6:09:00 AM

I see the westward move--so succinctly and brilliantly you created the images we can relate to. Congrats on your win, Juliet.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2021 8:47:00 PM

Great flow in your verse, Juliet, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/11/2021 4:06:00 PM

This is absolutely stunning, Juliet ! Congratulations on your top win!

Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/13/2021 9:43:00 AM

Thanks, JCB. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2021 1:27:00 PM

this one was unique and imaginative. A great word you chose!! Congrats.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/13/2021 9:42:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I tried to choose a word that I thought no one else would pick.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/11/2021 1:22:00 PM

Juliet, I absolutely loved this! You packed quite a bit of info into this small poem! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/13/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. I appreciate you hosting these contests. They've been fun, and now I'm going to try some other letters on my own.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2021 12:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your golden win, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/13/2021 9:40:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Poetic hugs.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/10/2021 5:04:00 PM

Wonderful, wild west work... Love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Juliet Ligon
Date: 5/13/2021 9:40:00 AM

Thanks, Gina. Blessings.