Werewolf

Werewolf 




Ravage with me
Lady Dark Panthera claws of red
And thrash against a starving mouth
Eaten by tongues and lips
Devouring inside surrender

Rip upon my skin those tender ache
And push your want to digging nails
Which renders you helpless

Resuscitate your kiss to mine
And strip past your urging
Tribal heat
Throat guttural whisper my name

Starve me stretched to your nakedness
So I may hunger more

Rhythmical impetuous cause
The night hears your cries
Pinned to the moons cool wall

Vampire at you neck Lady Dark
Pulls at your flowing red
To a ravenous climax
Soaking wet upon my knees
I emerge from a tidal bliss

The slow trickle line of sweat traces down my back
Full moon temptress

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Anthony Beesley

Date: 8/25/2010 11:38:00 AM

good and gripping...do i detect a little cross breeding going down?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2010 6:10:00 AM

Hello there envious one, thank you for your kind comment. Now that is what gets my ego going. I figure you know that. Sorry you woke up on the wrong side of your potty. As for me I am faceless with only love up my ass. I chuckled with the thought of wet upon your pants. I will not tell a soul that your poem has no flow. I get bullcr@ped comments myself. Like the ones you have on the bottom here. However being that I do not consider myself a poet, I really enjoyed your comment, Sidney LeeAnn

Brandy Megens

Date: 7/3/2009 11:29:00 AM

how hotttttt and sexy and on fire this poem is my friend woooooooo

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 7/2/2009 2:22:00 AM

There are alot of visuals.Like a sexy Fiction Movie Thriller scene=)<33

Karla Null

Date: 7/1/2009 8:59:00 PM

So vivid is your discription that I see it like a movie playing in my mind. X rated excellance...Karla

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2009 3:44:00 PM

Wow, Colin! You always deliver amazing writes. There has often been a lot of sexual activity associated with vampires, but werewolves (being men converted by the "Full moon temptress") have quite a bit of supernatural appeal for me. This is a far better "story" than any of the werewolf movies! Love, Carolyn