Were You Real

The night was young
As we danced
Beneath the radiant moon and stars
When midnight struck
You vanished from my sight
Like a fleeting dream that I've had before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 18, 2015 at 8:56 PM
What a beautiful poem.-Alexis
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January 27, 2015 at 8:52 PM
Keep dreaming and living the dream. Keep dancing and writing whats real.
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January 24, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Awe, Jennifer, never let go of how real a dream feels..love this:) have a nice day ~SKAT~
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