We'Re To Be

I saw what we would look like:
Those two Lilies living lively in close proximity;
So close, in fact, their identical buds stare into
their mere reflections of passionate pastal smiles
and blushing petals like the powdered cheeks of a middle school affectionary -

A glimpse of us displayed
in the large field - two Dandelions
uncommonly rooted within centimeters of each other,
Close-cornered so in that their seeds,
Like an arranged marriage, coupled in the wind's 
breasting breeze -
Yet as sure as death, to be split by unsure currents and rushes
of High and Low pressures.
Known Pressures;

I thought I caught a glance
Of what possibly could've been there-
growing azaleas
masked by a single magnolia:
self-infatuated, blinded by selfish desire (or wishful thinking)-
an image of what
we were to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 7, 2016 at 3:04 AM
Gavin D.S., this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 29, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Gavin D.S, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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June 19, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Very good use of metaphors..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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