We're Eternal Souls

We're eternal souls created by God; He has gifted us with both birth and Death. We aren't born perfect, and yet, we're not flawed; for it's not a sin to enjoy each breath, to experience love, or to be awed. How you live your life is left up to you God's not keeping a list, checking it twice; Man was given free will, not chores to do. While life encompasses naughty and nice, God's forgiveness erases sins; that's true! We waste time worrying about dying: but we're eternal souls, Death's not the end; thus dying need not be terrifying. Our faith teaches that our souls will ascend, while mortal feelings allow for crying. An all-consuming shadow in the dark, The Angel of Death approaches unseen. And shrouded in myth, it seems grim and stark, for its arrival is oft unforeseen; and it's feared, for extinguishing life's spark.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Hello Emile, oh this poem does speak. This is a new poetry form? Enjoy your day my friend. I like verses 1,2, 3.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 3:52 PM
Hello okay. Emile, oh-not a new form! I did not know that. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Pinet Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate all of your comments, this is not a new form, it's been around for a while my friend, Emile.
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Love the form, good work Emile...
Pinet Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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