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Wept Time

Wept Time Wept time yesterday heard a blast Why it flew in the sky without cast! No sound of seizure was heard Neither the rip of death was near Wept time yesterday in the height Felt wrong occurred in the atmosphere No collision with foreign objects!!! Nor the heart attack of time heard Wept time yesterday before ripe Lives of his issues suffocated fast A horror reigned in the life of time Justification heard death's rhyme Wept time yesterday again a plunge Dears of his relatives got blunt!!! Wet eyes blocked the way of heart Silence hugged the time don't weep dear. 19/5/ 2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 1:47:00 PM

- A whole world is crying - Touching poetry, Deepak - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Deepak Chalise
Date: 5/21/2016 6:35:00 PM

Anne-Lise, yes, How to prevent such big loss of lives. Thank you very much for, kind words.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/21/2016 5:56:00 AM

Is this about flight 804 crashing in the water? That is so sad Deepak. A moving piece! : )

Deepak Chalise
Date: 5/21/2016 12:57:00 PM

You caught on my Neck ,Connie.Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 8:40:00 PM

Sounds like a very difficult time for all that weeping, Deepak. I liked how you repeated the same phrase at the beginning of each stanza. LIke a backwards kyrielle!!!

Deepak Chalise
Date: 5/21/2016 12:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea. Like shadow sorrows follow us.