Notes About The Poem
08/01/24
Alexandrian.....
Contest by Hilo Poet
Went at Stream Strand
Natural
Went at stream strand to watch twilight ! The Sun went down. Started walk back to
home. Darkness to embower soon, peeping crescent Moon.Evening merging to night.
Too much tired was my feet.Hankering for car lift. Noticed headlights of a car
approaching from back. I stood getting no option. Car in slow motion. No response,
though showed hand. Seemed useless , just to stand. Pulled car-door: I preferred.
and hurriedly I entered. Got stunned, looked aslant. Driver seat was vacant. Car went
as usual, but in slow walking speed. Got puzzled, but what to do ? Ghost driver ! No
clue. Suddenly car hit bump. Promptly I made a jump. Man behind car came out.
He was pushing : No doubt.
Visual
Went at stream strand to watch
twilight ! The Sun went down.
Started walk back to home.
7 Darkness to embower soon,
5 peeping crescent Moon.
Evening merging to night.
Too much tired was my feet
hankering for car lift.
Noticed headlights of a car.
5 approaching from back.
7 I stood getting no option.
5 Car in slow motion.
No response, though showed hand.
Seemed useless , just to stand.
Pulled car-door: I preferred.
and hurriedly I entered.
Got stunned, looked aslant.
Driver seat was vacant.
Car went as usual,
but in slow walking speed.
7 Got puzzled, but what to do ?
5 Ghost driver ! No clue.
Suddenly car hit bump.
Promptly I made a jump.
Man behind car came out.
He was pushing : No doubt.
Copyright © Anisha Dutta | Year Posted 2024
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