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Wendy, Darling

Wendy, Darling Was a wretched little wench With a flask of whiskey Clasped in her fist And took to a swigging More often Than the lost boys ever knew Wendy, Darling Was a surrogate mother Who despised the reckless actions Of such a crew And it was mostly Peter To whom she cursed nasty, dirty, stupid boys lost in neverland forever engaged in rambunctious ploys Wendy, Darling Decided she'd had enough Building a great bonfire With all their stuff Leaving the lost To weep, sob and moan; for Wendy, Darling Simply smiled whilst swallowing A swig; and With her last ounce Flew out of there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2013 7:27:00 PM
Ah yes I know this wench. Cruel and vindictive, such a bitch. Perfect symmetry in the style. I think I'll have a swig and see if I can't find Wendy... ~Kilmer
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lori hopkins
Date: 10/1/2013 8:53:00 PM
funny you mention bitch, as i am working on a blog right now. the thesis "bitches everywhere for years have been getting a bad rap in the name of what could be argued as people really having a case of 'princess syndrome'. " ~Salud ;)
Date: 10/1/2013 6:55:00 PM
This is creative and unique. Full of imagery and imagination. Pulls the reader into the world of wendy and peter. nice job
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lori hopkins
Date: 10/1/2013 8:48:00 PM
thank you robin! ~lori
Date: 8/18/2013 2:23:00 PM
wow what an imagery you have. Kind of peaceful in it's own way.. thank you for sharing...LINDA
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lori hopkins
Date: 10/1/2013 8:47:00 PM
thank you Poet Destroyer! ~lori
Date: 8/18/2013 8:55:00 AM
Ohhh tales of Wendy cool, Peter gets too much credit! [poor Wendy!] Welcome to poetry soup, thank you for sharing. Light & Love
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Date: 8/17/2013 1:18:00 PM
I love this poem with such creative and imaginative detail. Welcome to the soup :)
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