Well, Well, Well

Some subtle Trouble in Minds so muddled-
With one small thought, reduced to rubble
This Agony will more than double
When the Truth "pops" me like a bubble...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 6:41 PM
chan this is unique and interesting. Gets the reader thinking. But don't pop like a bubble. Then I'll have one less friend. LOL hugs
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October 24, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Thanks, hon. I am Jekyll and Hyde (but it just depends on my mood lol).
Davis Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Thanks for the comment on my Love Fireworks poem. AAAWWW No one should be jealous of you. Your too honest and sweet. Unless you have a hidden evil side. LOL
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