Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Well Played

The photo is of Brennan, my three and a half year old grandson. He's fully focused on everything he does ~ sports, art, Pixar cars...and yes, cartoon videos...however...read on.

A soccer player at the age of three
with a cherub face and dimpled knee
this child was born from my progeny

Intently focused on kicking the ball
his aim was straight and he didn't fall
"SCORE!" everyone laughed at the call

Four goals that day he proudly made
but two for the other team, I'm afraid
He didn't care. Nor did I. Well played!

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Funom Makama April 28, 2018 at 8:04 AM This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...

James Horn March 1, 2018 at 3:30 PM Is that Winter Garden, Florida? What size hat does his hat trick wear? Lin Lane March 1, 2018 at 4:29 PM It is Florida. Thanks a lot.

Connie Marcum Wong February 28, 2018 at 12:43 PM How adorable he is Lin. Grandkids are our gift for raising our children. Your poem shines with pride for your little guy, and I can certainly see why. I am glad you will see him soon. I so enjoyed your sweet poem. I am faving this too! xxoo : ) Lin Lane March 1, 2018 at 4:28 PM I think he's kinda cute, too. Haha love him so much. Thanks, Connie.

Ilene Bauer February 27, 2018 at 5:54 PM i love everything about this, lin - especially the picture! adorable! the poem is beautifully written and gorgeously rhymed, too... Lin Lane February 28, 2018 at 10:45 AM Thanks, Ilene. Your comments are always encouraging.

Jan Allison February 27, 2018 at 10:37 AM Lin he is absolutely adorable and the poem is so cute ... he scored 4 goals and is a winner in everyone's eyes bless him. Am adding this little gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Lin Lane February 27, 2018 at 11:34 AM Thanks, Jan. On my way to Florida so I get to see him play Saturday.