Well Played

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The photo is of Brennan, my three and a half year old grandson. He's fully focused on everything he does ~ sports, art, Pixar cars...and yes, cartoon videos...however...read on. A soccer player at the age of three with a cherub face and dimpled knee this child was born from my progeny Intently focused on kicking the ball his aim was straight and he didn't fall "SCORE!" everyone laughed at the call Four goals that day he proudly made but two for the other team, I'm afraid He didn't care. Nor did I. Well played!

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2018 8:04:00 AM

This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...

James Horn

Date: 3/1/2018 3:30:00 PM

Is that Winter Garden, Florida? What size hat does his hat trick wear?

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2018 4:29:00 PM

It is Florida. Thanks a lot.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/28/2018 12:43:00 PM

How adorable he is Lin. Grandkids are our gift for raising our children. Your poem shines with pride for your little guy, and I can certainly see why. I am glad you will see him soon. I so enjoyed your sweet poem. I am faving this too! xxoo : )

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2018 4:28:00 PM

I think he's kinda cute, too. Haha love him so much. Thanks, Connie.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/28/2018 1:27:00 AM

Oh Lin, I just knew from the photo this was going to be such a sweet poem! I loved this!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/28/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Arthur. This little guy owns my heart.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/27/2018 5:54:00 PM

i love everything about this, lin - especially the picture! adorable! the poem is beautifully written and gorgeously rhymed, too...

Lin Lane
Date: 2/28/2018 10:45:00 AM

Thanks, Ilene. Your comments are always encouraging.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2018 10:37:00 AM

Lin he is absolutely adorable and the poem is so cute ... he scored 4 goals and is a winner in everyone's eyes bless him. Am adding this little gem to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2018 11:34:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. On my way to Florida so I get to see him play Saturday.