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"welcomed Wind"

A blast of wind blows
through my hectic world today,
clearing my mind free.

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James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 1:37 PM

A light warm breeze below the Lemon tree you mention Michael sounds good. I am really enjoying your short writes >> James

Juan Paolo Galua

August 13, 2010 at 5:07 AM

oh...I can relate so much..thank you...^_^ v

Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2010 at 5:17 PM

Love reading your haiku, Michael. Let me see one more now!

Wilma Neels

August 2, 2010 at 9:34 PM

Sometimes I moan when "the cape doctor" blows in Cape Town, from now on I will try and appreciate the wind more for its purifying aspects.. Great haiku Michael ~it was only a pleasure btw :) Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 2, 2010 at 5:22 PM

A nice thought of wind clearing the mind. enjoyed, Michael

Poet Destroyer A

August 2, 2010 at 4:58 PM

I think hectic is a good word to use for a description of life.. Michael, the nature of the wind is the best breeze to take some of them hectic feelings off your shoulders. A very nice and inspiring haiku, I can feel a cleanse of thoughts thru your poem,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

August 2, 2010 at 4:41 PM

enjoyed your haiku...I like the idea of a storm purifying my thoughts and worries.

Sara Kendrick

August 2, 2010 at 4:36 PM

Glad that you have been freed to pen these great words for us to read tonight..I hope the wind is always at your back helping you along the way..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

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