Welcomed Responsibility

And so he sits, awaiting his turn
His face settling in his open hands
His heart steady but ready to ignite
As anxiety overtakes his emotions

Noise surrounds, yet silence fills
His void of consciousness within
For his name to be called, his time
Is what keeps him from passing out

He couldn’t be there, told to leave
Matter of fact, escorted to the door
So now he waits for his name called
His life will then be forever changed

For if it’s a boy, oh the games they’d play
Or a girl, the admiration he’d bestow
But in his heart, he holds them now
Awaiting the news of the arrival

Mister…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 26, 2008 at 6:35 AM
This is wonderful Michael, very sensitive and you captured the anxiety and emotions so very well. Love the 1st two lines of the second verse. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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July 25, 2008 at 7:27 AM
Wow. Must admit I never put much thought to how an expectant father feels at the moment of birth, as I always felt so much empathy for the mother. An amazing, honest write that opened my eyes in a beautiful way. Well done! Love, Shar
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July 25, 2008 at 7:04 AM
It is so beautiful to hear a father's perspective of this precious moment.....awaiting the birth of your child. With such a heart filled with love, what a lucky child to be coming into your arms. So many are born unwanted. Beautiful words, Michael. Fondly, Carrie
Jordan Avatar
July 25, 2008 at 6:27 AM
This poem really hit me hard Michael - my older children I failed so bad - Spent most of their lives on the run or in the pen - my 6 year old daughter has never seen me high or had to worry about me and my children who are grown and married now respect the changes I have made and love their dad - I have two beautiful grandsons - I'm sorry I didn't mean to ramble on - I loved this poem
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