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The pale face of nature Of flowers and treetops So battered and weary Come out of the shadows Tattered and bobbing At long last are smiling The welcomed arrival Of sunkissed horizons Has blissfully welcomed The gold in the morning All smitten with cheer Trees lean to the side Drunk on the sun Lifting their branches Keeping it near I long for it too As I move out my chair From under the shade To drink in the sun After dark winter days To welcome it here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2009 6:34:00 PM
Come on Spring!! Excellent write Carrie.
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:43:00 PM
Wonderful illustration of emotion, congrats on your win in the contest!. Also-thank you for your sweet comment.-Always Alexandra
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:57:00 AM
Nice use of this form, excellent piece! Thanks for your warm comment on my stuff. rgds, Ernesto
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:34:00 AM
It warms our very being Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/25/2009 7:33:00 AM
Ohhh Carrie eeekkss can't ya already feel it. After your comment I have one question....Can I be your new best friend? lol. You are as wild as a buck deer and I love it.
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Date: 2/25/2009 3:26:00 AM
Love 'Drunk on the sun'. I could feel that way, once it gets here. I am so missing its warmth. I am ready to welcome the new season. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:56:00 AM
Nice poem and great opening line...Raul
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