Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Welcome To the Twilight Zone

I love the sky as twilight falls
A breathtaking sight to behold
As hundreds of birds take to wing

Birds duck and dive, I hear their calls
From lilac skies now tinged with gold
Loud squawks, it's a shame they can't sing!

Beating wings, bird flight never stalls
As skies darken, night's taking hold
I don't want to miss anything

The changing sky always enthrals
I'll stay out until it gets cold
In summer, fall, winter or spring

The setting sun, seabirds in flight
I'll always marvel at this sight

Trilonnet Contest ~ Image 4

Checked with rhymezone and howmanysyllables

Sponsored by Joseph May

06/13/23

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Joseph May June 26, 2023 at 5:17 AM "The changing sky always enthrals", Wonderful write Jan, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2023 at 7:56 AM Very pretty, Jan! Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:10 PM Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus June 19, 2023 at 5:09 AM I would willingly come to enjoy the lovely imagery of your twilight zone, Jan! Regards & Hugs // paul Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:10 PM Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta June 18, 2023 at 10:53 PM It’s now prohibited to mention contest or name of Sponsor at bottom of the poem. Please notice. Also pic. Etc to be mentioned at the ‘notes’ section. Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:10 PM Thanks so much Anisha i will leave the details on as the contest was posted before the new rule came in:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor June 18, 2023 at 5:15 PM What a lovely theme Jan. Your incredible Poetry reflects a surreal imagery and the picture just reinforces your perfect words. This one is a favorite... Thank you for sharing... Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:09 PM Thanks Michael despite what some think there is more to me than just a poop poet :-) hugs jan xx

Jack Horne June 18, 2023 at 4:09 AM yes, a beautiful time of day, for sure Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:07 PM Thanks so much Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

JC Brul June 17, 2023 at 6:54 AM What a spectacular sight! Breathtakingly beautiful! All the best in the contest .Blessings! Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:03 PM Thanks so much JCB:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile June 16, 2023 at 4:51 AM I really enjoyed " The other side of Jan" here!! So beautiful and as already stated, lovely imagery! That being said, with all those birds, your sequel most definitely should include the droppings!!! lol, Happy Friday xxoo Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 2:02 PM thanks Mike I do post the odd serious poem like an emotional piece today - but yesterday's was pure poop! look out for my limerick contest coming soon. I have posted a blog lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper June 14, 2023 at 5:43 PM Love the imagery and the feeling of moving. Good luck in Joseph's contest. Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 1:54 PM Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mcsorley June 14, 2023 at 1:40 AM Beautiful imagery Jan x Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 1:48 PM Thanks so much David:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel June 14, 2023 at 12:20 AM Amazing, simply astounding one, Jan:) sure to place high:) Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 1:48 PM Thanks so much Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2023 at 4:56 PM From lilac skies now tinged with gold…love the last two lines! Nice, Jan! Sure is nice to have you around! xx Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 1:47 PM aww its good to be back:-) Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet June 13, 2023 at 3:15 PM Jan, your poem is a magnificent work of art, replete with vivid imagery. Your prowess in this format is truly remarkable! Wishing you all the best in the contest. Jan Allison June 19, 2023 at 1:47 PM Thanks so much Sotto:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer June 13, 2023 at 2:08 PM jan- you've done a fantastic job with this format! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison June 13, 2023 at 2:49 PM thanks so much Ilene i wrote it at break at school but had lots of tweaks to do when i got home:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh June 13, 2023 at 1:58 PM Birds duck and dive, shame they can’t sing, brilliant oxymorons Jan, and a super Trilonnet, and not a bit of poop in sight lol! Great one for the contest, cheers David Jan Allison June 13, 2023 at 2:48 PM lol David, yeah amazing for once no poop lol, but i will be doint a poop limerick contest soon lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane June 13, 2023 at 1:39 PM We really were thinking alike. Your thoughts are as lovely as the image, Jan. Jan Allison June 13, 2023 at 1:50 PM Thanks Lin, the image jumped out at me, yet our poems are so different, i adore the setting sun:-) hugs jan xx

Joe Maverick June 13, 2023 at 1:33 PM Creation viewed, and a poem is born.' A great end to the day, I say.! Jan Allison June 13, 2023 at 1:49 PM aww thanks Joe i appreciate your comment:-) hugs jan xx