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Welcome Spring

gone
wintry
overcast
melancholic
gloom

spring
sunshine
renewing
detonating
bright





AP: Honorable Mention 2023

Submitted on March 2, 2019 for contest LIGHT UP THE PAGE sponsored by JOSEPH MAY  -  RANKED 3RD

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/10/2019 10:24:00 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Line - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 10:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2019 6:41:00 PM

spring is here and it is very welcome after the dark days of winter:-) many congrats on your win Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 8:36:00 PM

It snowed today... send spring up our way, Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 8:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Welcome spring, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/9/2019 10:57:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine. Love your visits.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2019 7:50:00 PM

LIne, you caught me going off again! But for now I am caught up anyway!! i was looking at definition of lanterne and saw that all the ones I have written must be wrong by Soup's definition.The first and last line of each verse is supposed to be synonyms. Yours are kind of synonyms: spring compared to bright and gone compared to gloom. I think I will have to relabel all my old lanterne poems!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/2/2019 8:06:00 PM

We are always learning... and re-learning... LOL

Carole Duet

Date: 3/2/2019 3:15:00 PM

I really like this one, Line. It so perfectly describes the feelings Spring ignites as opposed to those of winter (even though I personally like winter but I live in the south...lol).

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/2/2019 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carole. You are very welcome to come and experience some of our famous snow dumps. LOL