Welcome Spring

gone wintry overcast melancholic gloom spring sunshine renewing detonating bright
AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on March 2, 2019 for contest LIGHT UP THE PAGE sponsored by JOSEPH MAY - RANKED 3RD
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Barden Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:24 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Line - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:27 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory. Most appreciated.
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:41 PM
spring is here and it is very welcome after the dark days of winter:-) many congrats on your win Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:36 PM
It snowed today... send spring up our way, Jan.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 8:24 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: Welcome spring, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 10:57 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. Love your visits.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:50 PM
LIne, you caught me going off again! But for now I am caught up anyway!! i was looking at definition of lanterne and saw that all the ones I have written must be wrong by Soup's definition.The first and last line of each verse is supposed to be synonyms. Yours are kind of synonyms: spring compared to bright and gone compared to gloom. I think I will have to relabel all my old lanterne poems!
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 8:06 PM
We are always learning... and re-learning... LOL
Duet Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:15 PM
I really like this one, Line. It so perfectly describes the feelings Spring ignites as opposed to those of winter (even though I personally like winter but I live in the south...lol).
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much, Carole. You are very welcome to come and experience some of our famous snow dumps. LOL
Kiser Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Yeaaaaaaaaa! Spring... Lovely lanterne's that are very anticipating of the season's arrival.
Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, ML.
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