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Colourful carmine leaves tardily float down, One by one like a russet rain, Tall tanned trees wearing a gossamer gown, Sighing let go of the ruby train, Leaves swirl and twirl like a crimson chain; Orange pumpkins are bright and ready, Children come with their tricks or treats, As the cerise leaves fall down steady, Children await their Halloween sweets, Fall is here with its welcome beats. 09/19/18

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Date: 11/11/2018 2:01:00 PM
Lovely, Jo. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:06:00 AM
Charming and whimsical, Jo, and so much fun - I enjoyed this write thoroughly! Congrats on your wonderful win, my friend - blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 10/30/2018 6:26:00 PM
Very nicely penned Jo..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/29/2018 11:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Jo. Well done.
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Date: 10/28/2018 3:19:00 PM
Yay! I am so happy to see this gem on the winner's list Jo. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 9/19/2018 9:15:00 PM
Jo, this poem flows so smoothly. I love your depiction of gossamer gown and ruby train. Brilliant imagery! I am sure this will do well. : )
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Date: 9/19/2018 5:37:00 PM
wonderfully done. I don'T know why this one is so difficult for me to start. YOURS is a hit!!
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Date: 9/19/2018 4:28:00 PM
your fall is one glowing pageant, jo... beautifully rendered! as for your Q, english is not my mother tongue...this language was taught to us since kinder; i went on to be a lame college professor of this subject among others, hah!... huggs
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Date: 9/19/2018 11:29:00 AM
Imagery of Fall..an eventful, scenic depiction.
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