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Weightless

clear vision of motion turning to the morning sun flashing images dark light shifting shuttered scenes softly smoothed silhouettes inhaled with every breath tips quietly chatter ironing irregularities shadows cast flickering sights lazy s spewing frozen wake torque tilted opposing weight sharp edges holding rhythms frames of scrolled nature securely extended stretched torso freedoms eager escape embracing crystal harmony floating upward un-weighted body ballet of splendid spirits momentarily air independent a denizen of winged flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/13/2010 9:58:00 AM
Our winged creatures do seem to have no weight and I envy the freedom they find in flight, Jim. Nice use of creative imagery to createthe morning scene. Thanks for visiting my work and I look forward to reading more of yours. Best wishes, Carolyn
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