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Weightless

clear vision of motion
turning to the morning sun
flashing images dark light
shifting shuttered scenes
softly smoothed silhouettes
inhaled with every breath
tips quietly chatter
ironing irregularities
shadows cast flickering sights
lazy s spewing frozen wake
torque tilted opposing weight
sharp edges holding rhythms
frames of scrolled nature
securely extended stretched torso
freedoms eager escape
embracing crystal harmony
floating upward un-weighted
body ballet of splendid spirits
momentarily air independent
a denizen of winged flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/13/2010 9:58:00 AM
Our winged creatures do seem to have no weight and I envy the freedom they find in flight, Jim. Nice use of creative imagery to createthe morning scene. Thanks for visiting my work and I look forward to reading more of yours. Best wishes, Carolyn
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