Weightless

trying to stay trim lost little boy dragging to the gym going on a limb can’t find the joy? make your song a hymn before your days get dark and grim lift that weight praising Him
---------- A Tercou: 5a:4b:5a 5a:4b:5a 8a:6a
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George Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Lift the weight praising Him. Then everything will seem weightless. Good one Jeff !
Delgado Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:54 AM
efficient in its depth and deep in its efficiency... nice!
Kyser Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:24 PM
thanks, Roberto - I keep trying out all these forms, and some, I really like - this is one of those I may come back to!
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