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Weighting For the Dough

Thirty pounds in sixty days That how much less Jeffrey weighs Burning all those calories Should have slowed the global freeze Missy’s joined the weight loss scene She is looking fit and lean We can press, continue on All the cheesecake bites are gone Shadows of our former selves Someone slap those Keebler elves Got another ten to go Someone hide the cookie dough

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Date: 12/27/2022 8:07:00 PM
Wow! I am very impressed. Good for you two! :) gw
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Date: 12/27/2022 11:52:00 AM
wow! congratulations on a huge accomplishment, with the benefit of a very cool poem with which to celebrate...
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Date: 12/27/2022 8:41:00 AM
Cute ending. Congratulations on getting healthy and staying healthy. Way to go. Holidays can be really hard on the willpower. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara
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