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I wrote this sijo as a response to a poem my boyfriend (first love I reunited with two weeks ago) generated with A.I. I do not use A.I. for literature. It is more useful as a research tool. I am neutral about A.I. used for making art, but I do not use A.I. for literature or art. The poem the A.I. generated was based on my style of writing poetry, so it likely searched through my PoetrySoup page. The poem is titled "Silent Weight Of Love." It describes my longing and loss of my first love for 6 years. My first love is the only person I have consistently written many romantic poems for. The A.I. recognized my deep-seated feelings for this man. So this sijo is my response stating the weight is gone, because the wait is over.

The weight of my lost love for you was finally removed As soon as the wait for your love for me had ended too. So I now wait patiently for the day our love follows more through.

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