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Weight of the World

slowly I tread water weight of the world on my shell who invited the elephant donkey sneaked aboard gravity of a city’s weight bears down on me
*Written April 29, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/29/2014 4:50:00 PM
I hope you are all right...Don't put to much pressure on your self...Share the burden and spread out the weight...It will feel lighter...hugs Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/29/2014 5:26:00 PM
It's just for a contest, Tim. The photo had a turtle with an elephant and a donkey on its back. Thanks for reading.

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