Weight of the World

slowly I tread water weight of the world on my shell who invited the elephant donkey sneaked aboard gravity of a city’s weight bears down on me
*Written April 29, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 29, 2014 at 4:50 PM
I hope you are all right...Don't put to much pressure on your self...Share the burden and spread out the weight...It will feel lighter...hugs Tim
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April 29, 2014 at 5:26 PM
It's just for a contest, Tim. The photo had a turtle with an elephant and a donkey on its back. Thanks for reading.
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