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Weight of Passage

fresh snowfall whispers morning silent waking call memories incarnate innocence of child play now adult toil weight of passage toil adult now play child of innocence incarnate memories call waking silence morning whispers snowfall fresh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/5/2014 4:00:00 PM
Great poem. Interesting form. Nicely written.
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Date: 1/1/2014 5:18:00 PM
oh , I see it is a reversing type of poem. How neat!!! What is this form's name? seems like one I should know. happy new year to you!!
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Date: 1/1/2014 12:44:00 PM
- A peaceful and beautiful picture - lovely poem Mike. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - HAPPY NEW YEAR 2014!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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