Mike Bayles Poet Verse

Weight of Passage

fresh snowfall whispers morning
silent waking call memories incarnate
innocence of child play
now adult toil
weight of passage
toil adult now
play child of innocence
incarnate memories call waking silence
morning whispers snowfall fresh

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Scott Thirtyseven January 5, 2014 at 4:00 PM Great poem. Interesting form. Nicely written.

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2014 at 5:18 PM oh , I see it is a reversing type of poem. How neat!!! What is this form's name? seems like one I should know. happy new year to you!!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2014 at 12:44 PM - A peaceful and beautiful picture - lovely poem Mike. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - HAPPY NEW YEAR 2014!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)