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Weighing Reflections

Weighing Reflections while listening to the early birds singing my mind, longing for the break of day ending nights contemplations thoughts cluster still on the edge of darkness as concerns mound tripping the days awakening with apprehension sipping coffee as the sun peeps its head realities, hanging on the rim of reflection bartering questions queued early birds catching their worms? trivial nonsense against life’s ledger marked in black on white a bed of petals scattered in a briar patch may smell sweet--- thorns hidden from view wearing rose hued shades All Rights Reserved @ Debra Squyres 2013

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Date: 4/3/2013 2:09:00 PM
Beauty truly is in the eye of the beholder. You beholded real good here. :) Do I sound like a hick? :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 1:14:00 PM
Very nice Debra... Donna
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Date: 4/3/2013 10:31:00 AM
I like what you did with the ending. There's always to be said when things are "rose hued". Very nicely done! :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 9:48:00 AM
- Debra, it's so beautiful to listen to the birds' morning song - Beautiful poem! - Enjoy the spring sun. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 7:52:00 AM
This is a beautiful and wonderful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this morning! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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