Weeping Willows

Weeping willows never weep But hula slowly on winds Weepings by sugar maples Very tasty cry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raynes Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:35 PM
I'd never thought like this about the willow, mice write
Kiser Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:32 AM
I have always planted a willow tree at every house we built which is three willow trees. They have always done the hula, I just did not realize it until I read your poem. Love the contrast of the two trees. Well done, my friend. Amazing.
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:57 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. They're somewhat magical trees; writing beneath one in the summer breeze is quite inspirational.
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Interesting lines penned. The weeping willow does seem to do the hula in the wind. Sara
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:10 AM
Yes, I love them; they're always so cool to sit under in the hot weather when there's a light breeze. Glad you stopped by to read and comment. Thanks
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