Weeping Willows

Weeping willows never weep But hula slowly on winds Weepings by sugar maples Very tasty cry.

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 9/13/2018 1:35:00 PM

I'd never thought like this about the willow, mice write

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:22:00 PM

Thank you.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2018 5:32:00 AM

I have always planted a willow tree at every house we built which is three willow trees. They have always done the hula, I just did not realize it until I read your poem. Love the contrast of the two trees. Well done, my friend. Amazing.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/12/2018 5:57:00 AM

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. They're somewhat magical trees; writing beneath one in the summer breeze is quite inspirational.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2018 8:17:00 AM

Interesting lines penned. The weeping willow does seem to do the hula in the wind. Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/12/2018 4:10:00 AM

Yes, I love them; they're always so cool to sit under in the hot weather when there's a light breeze. Glad you stopped by to read and comment. Thanks