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Weeping Willow

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/16/2018 3:55:00 PM

it is beautiful in both its words and its display :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, PS. Obviously it was a windy day. LOL

Francesca Pappadogiannis

Date: 8/13/2018 1:34:00 PM

Oh, just wow..... First time I have seen a poem set out this way! Fabulous,brilliant - loved it. Congrats Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 1:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Francesca. Most appreciated.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/13/2018 10:05:00 AM

My favorite tree of all. Congratulations on your win. I can only imagine the time and patience it took to create this well-shaped, well-written poem. A fav.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/13/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

John Gondolf

Date: 8/12/2018 9:58:00 AM

I really enjoyed this lovely poem, Line, congrats. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, John. Most appreciated.

Roy Pett

Date: 8/12/2018 6:10:00 AM

Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win Line, absolutely lovely. :))

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Roy, for your much appreciated re-visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/11/2018 10:57:00 PM

I love this Line! Very creative! Congratulations on your great win! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thank you, Connie, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2018 10:24:00 PM

Such a creative willow, Line. Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/12/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/11/2018 6:47:00 PM

Now this is really nice and well written verse, Line, and love the shape.. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 9:20:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/11/2018 5:36:00 PM

Wonderful weeping willow Line! Thoroughly enjoyed :) Congratulations on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest, xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 9:21:00 PM

Your contest was awesome, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 8/11/2018 4:25:00 PM

Line, that is a wonderful verse that would stand out on its own without your fantastic artistic Willow Tree, loved it, well done and a top win, regards, Kevin

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kevin. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/11/2018 4:17:00 PM

Very creative, love it, congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:12:00 PM

Thank you, Tania, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/1/2018 12:18:00 PM

wow line you have nailed this one Bravo!:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2018 2:25:00 PM

- Beautiful weeping willow, Line :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 7:42:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Warren Doll

Date: 7/6/2018 8:50:00 AM

So amazing! Well done, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Warren. Most appreciated.

Roy Pett

Date: 7/4/2018 10:47:00 AM

Beautiful, love willow trees and I love your poem Line, absolutely brilliant. :))

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Roy. Most appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/4/2018 10:42:00 AM

A weeping willow but with a beautiful shape crafted by a poetic heart and an opulent imagination! A wonderful write! The best of luck in the contest Line.. Stay blessed.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/6/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Besma, for your delightful visit and comment.

Mick Talbot

Date: 7/4/2018 5:14:00 AM

Beautiful, and I know what's involved, all the best wishes for the contest, Mick

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/4/2018 7:03:00 AM

Thanks, Mick, for your lovely visit and comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/4/2018 1:52:00 AM

Amazing Line, you've spent a lot of time on this. Willows are beautiful trees, love how they sway gently in the breeze at a waters edge. Good luck Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/4/2018 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Tom, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/3/2018 10:37:00 PM

Excellent Line...so far the best one...best of luck my friend...love & light...^WW^

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/3/2018 10:40:00 PM

Thank you for your vote of confidence... 'tis very early ! LOL Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/3/2018 9:50:00 PM

I love it! Really LOVE it! I just saved it as a fav. Looks like a willow and sounds like a willow and makes me think of the four willows I have on my property. Thank you for writing it. Miss Line wrote a poem about a willow, It has made me a happy fellow! I look at the paper and I see, A willow looking back at me! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/3/2018 10:14:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. I am honored. Line xx