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Weeping Waters

Tears of the falls stream, From the pain of gravity: Basin made of tears.

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Date: 12/1/2009 3:47:00 AM

I have a good visual on this write, well done Raul. Good read for me... RdP

Date: 9/1/2009 9:09:00 AM

Basin of tears ......very nice

Date: 8/25/2009 11:41:00 PM

so deep very deep-touched my heart--charma

Date: 8/25/2009 6:49:00 PM

gripping interpretation of waterfalls! has a Native American feel to such splendor! Raul! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo

Date: 8/17/2009 5:19:00 AM

Good morning Raul. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Date: 8/16/2009 10:36:00 PM

Beautiful choice of words ....W5bbw

Date: 8/16/2009 5:54:00 PM

Very well done my friend! Laura :)

Date: 8/16/2009 1:47:00 PM

Excellent Haiki Raul>>James

Date: 8/16/2009 1:00:00 PM

Basin made of tears..that is fire my friend..good work.

Date: 8/16/2009 12:25:00 PM

awesome haiku ... love this one :)

Date: 8/16/2009 6:47:00 AM

Much H2o to make a splash in your perfect 5-7-5 , Rual .....

Date: 8/15/2009 11:10:00 PM

Ofcourse it is, witty, Sincerely Moses