Weeping Waters

Tears of the falls stream,
From the pain of gravity:
Basin made of tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:47 AM
I have a good visual on this write, well done Raul. Good read for me... RdP
Lopez Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Basin of tears ......very nice
Chircop Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 11:41 PM
so deep very deep-touched my heart--charma
Goff Avatar
August 25, 2009 at 6:49 PM
gripping interpretation of waterfalls! has a Native American feel to such splendor! Raul! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 5:19 AM
Good morning Raul. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Null Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Beautiful choice of words ....W5bbw
Mckenzie Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:54 PM
Very well done my friend! Laura :)
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Excellent Haiki Raul>>James
Higgins Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:00 PM
Basin made of tears..that is fire my friend..good work.
Knox Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 12:25 PM
awesome haiku ... love this one :)
Kelly Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Much H2o to make a splash in your perfect 5-7-5 , Rual .....
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 11:10 PM
Ofcourse it is, witty, Sincerely Moses
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