Weeping Petals

Sobbing flowers mourn,
As cancer plagues the garden:
Grub worms at their roots.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Natures attacks herself, nice Haiku Raul >> James
Crane Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 2:53 PM
great description raul :) ..i'm glad to find my words back :) ..all thanks to my mentor : the wordsmith ..i've been reading on gs & ps again and thats what inspired me to to continue with what i should be doin :) ..thanks for the comments my friend ..much appreciation . Marco
Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 1:01 PM
I see that you got at the root of the problem...Great idea...Good luck....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Thanks for the placement in the contest..Very difficult occupation deciding who wins with all the well written Haiku ....Sara
Freeman Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Excellent take on the picture Raul. Agape, Moses
Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 11:05 PM
I love the title Raul,and the mourning of the flowers..Original View..which i enjoyes reading..Charma
Strand Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 1:59 PM
Thank you Raul for the much valued honour to my poem in your contest.Rgds Brian
James Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 1:11 AM
Excellent description Raul. Thank you for my placement in your Contest, Can wait to enter your new one!!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace