Weeping Mistress Room

An unwelcomed guest
Appears as a gray mist cloud
In the gloomy room
Weeping mistress is missing
Clandestine love encounters












Example for Enchanted House Contest
5-20-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 9:00 PM
A 7, Nayda, for this haunting, appealing tanka. Janice
Negron Flores Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thank you Janice
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