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Weep with Me

Weep with me I hold my breath in I won't let this free There's no stilling this ache That's inside of me The grief and the pain Rip away and break out To flow like a stream From my eyes and my mouth A high, keening sob, A deep, throaty sigh, Escape with great force And I finally Cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/23/2025 12:42:00 PM
After reading your most recent, I went to your first one to confirm that you've got it, and you've got it. Brevity lines delivering substance - my fav style of writing used on the majority of writes I'd lifelong accumulated and brought with me to Soup. I've since found thrill, beauty and challenge in longer lines, but I'll always be fond of bam, bam, bam lines - like this emotive one. I'll be back to visit. Must not forget your name, that's the hard part ... CayCay
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/24/2025 5:52:00 AM
Wow, thank you CayCay! I am grateful for the feedback. I'll come by to visit you soon too! Xoxo Crystol Woods;)
Date: 4/9/2024 1:03:00 AM
I can fell this pain, xoxo hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/9/2024 10:03:00 AM
Ty for tuning in
Date: 4/8/2024 6:54:00 PM
Sniff. Okay. Nice poem.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/9/2024 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Tom

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