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Week's End

Week's end rain Pit, pat, drip, flood Mud, slush, slide Water overflowing and rising Muddy water Wash the fields Prepare for the spring Leaves composted Prepare the soil for the seed's Nurturing to great fruit bearers Majestic gardener is at work today.

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Date: 2/8/2010 4:13:00 AM
Great write...We need the rain even though we don't want the clouds. Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:00:00 AM
We too, have our work cut out for us, once the storms have passed! Good luck, Doris!!
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Date: 2/6/2010 6:52:00 AM
This is a wet one. I like your idea of washing the Earth...the renewing. Love, daver
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:49:00 AM
Go to it Doris.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:03:00 AM
Hi Doris, my friend!...I love this type of manual work, unfortunately, I live in the city at present in a condo!... but, have fondly btdt and will again! thanks for your kind words! ..... yes, my computer is broken and I won't get a new one for a few, right at the same time I am finishing work on a book of poetry! whew! my Daughters and their laptops have been my light! (writing from one right now in Madison Wisconsin!) love, jimbo
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:18:00 PM
Nature indeed is always at work for something new and better. Great write, Doris! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:51:00 PM
I can see this picture Doris...and I can feel,Spring is near,,,beautiful
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:20:00 PM
What a lyrical beat to your words Doris.. luv your last line ... watching those 24 inches of snow falling as I type ... your poem makes the warmer weather seem closer .. thankxx I needed that... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:15:00 PM
soon, I hope. Refreshing. Thank you.
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:06:00 PM
Man that Majestic Gardener sure has been at work here in NC...we got around 2 inches of rain in the last day and half...Enjoyed your poem...Marty
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:47:00 PM
That sounds like what we have had all week, but no one around here has been complaining much. We had such a dry summer last year, rain is a blessing. Enjoyed the read, have a wonderful evening. Ron
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Date: 2/5/2010 6:17:00 PM
SAD BUT TRUE ALL THIS RAIN IS PREPARING US FOR SOMETHING. HOPEFULLY THE FLOWERS. NICE POEM. ALSO THANKS FOR READING MY POEM ."HEARTBROKEN BUT IN LOVE". I ALSO READ YOUR POEM ''LOVE'' ALSO'' FLASHES''.....NICE.......I.T.
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