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Weekend Recitation
SURREAL FEEL
I looked,I saw an image blue
a memory,fleeting yet true,
midst the black,white and grey
just awaiting me to portrait;
I tried to re-capture this dream,
reality's not how it seems,
it flows & ebbs as morning mist,
just out of reach,shadows persist;
A high sun then dazzles my eyes,
frustration,streams out soundless sighs,
forever lost,this unique insight,
when suddenly,I start to write
Creative words,so surreal
will my little song appeal ?
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