Weekend Away Beach

Blossoms and sunshine
freshes of the spring
walk on the beach
light breeze
like a touch of heaven
youthening and,
trancelike.
divine ambiance
Children inventing sand castles
worry free and carefree
but a moment for families to be united,
a moment to be in a world
free of mayhem
dribbly
a distinctive universe,
inhabitable,
revivalistic.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Congrats!
Blessing Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:06 AM
THANK YOU
Ogundare Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on your win, friend.
Blessing Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 3:06 AM
THANK YOU
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:40 PM
Your poem reads like it was divinely inspired Nkateko. Congratulations on your wonderful win. 7 ; )
Blessing Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 4:28 PM
THANK YOU
Neumann Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations Nkateko. This is an often forgotten strength of South Africa, often forgotten and beautifully described. Many wishes, Kai
Blessing Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Thank you very much
Gupta Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:17 AM
Aah, what a relief ... a space with objects to breathe in ... and stay in a grin ...
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