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Weekend Away Beach

Blossoms and sunshine
freshes of the spring
walk on the beach
light breeze
like a touch of heaven
youthening and,
trancelike.
divine ambiance
Children inventing sand castles
worry free and carefree
but a moment for families to be united,
a moment to be in a world
free of mayhem
dribbly
a distinctive universe,
inhabitable,
revivalistic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/14/2017 9:21:00 PM
Congrats!
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Nkateko Blessing
Date: 5/15/2017 3:06:00 AM
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Date: 5/13/2017 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, friend.
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Nkateko Blessing
Date: 5/15/2017 3:06:00 AM
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Date: 5/13/2017 2:40:00 PM
Your poem reads like it was divinely inspired Nkateko. Congratulations on your wonderful win. 7 ; )
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Nkateko Blessing
Date: 5/15/2017 4:28:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2017 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Nkateko. This is an often forgotten strength of South Africa, often forgotten and beautifully described. Many wishes, Kai
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Nkateko Blessing
Date: 5/13/2017 1:31:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 4/7/2017 5:17:00 AM
Aah, what a relief ... a space with objects to breathe in ... and stay in a grin ...
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