Weed

Rolled up smoke drugs
Smoke and get haiku
Run out buy more smokey drugs time

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Beata Agustin

November 24, 2025 at 9:03 PM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

January 30, 2016 at 7:51 PM

james, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --

Casarah Nance

August 22, 2014 at 6:54 PM

your form wasn't quite spot on, you can look up forms on the link in the header. I did get a kick outta your line "smoke and get haiku" a play on words, humorous

Carolyn Devonshire

August 22, 2014 at 6:50 AM

James, I've known people who steal to get money for drugs. Their money as well as their dreams seem to go up in smoke. A thought-provoking write. Best wishes, Carolyn

Tracey Lawrence

August 21, 2014 at 9:29 PM

i found that this didn't really flow.... and not to offend you but weed is actually very dangerous if it is not used correctly in my opinion the only people who should smoke it would be the people who need medicalmarijuana.

James Robertson

August 21, 2014 at 9:42 PM

Thanks for your comment, its good to get feedback :)

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