Wedding Vows At Twilight.

May our setting sun
bring out every color of
our passion for life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 28, 2010 at 3:54 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Much shared in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen
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August 22, 2010 at 7:48 PM
This is nice putting imagery into it! congatuations, Gerard. LUv, Andrea
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August 20, 2010 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations Gerard on your #3, Agape, Moses
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August 20, 2010 at 10:21 AM
How very nice. Congratulations
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August 20, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in Linda-Marie's contest "Voicing Vows". Love, Carol
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August 20, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Congrats Gerard on your success in my Voicing Vows contest with these lovely words.. appreciate your support ..ciao with luv..
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August 20, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Stunning image Gerard.. All the best for the contest ~ Wilma
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August 19, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Beautiful image, Gerard. If you take "and" out of the last line and separate the other two words with a comma, you'll have the syllable count Linda's looking for. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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