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Wedding Vows At Twilight.

May our setting sun bring out every color of our passion for life.

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Date: 8/28/2010 3:54:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Much shared in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 7:48:00 PM

This is nice putting imagery into it! congatuations, Gerard. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 8/20/2010 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations Gerard on your #3, Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/20/2010 10:21:00 AM

How very nice. Congratulations

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/20/2010 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in Linda-Marie's contest "Voicing Vows". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/20/2010 8:17:00 AM

Congrats Gerard on your success in my Voicing Vows contest with these lovely words.. appreciate your support ..ciao with luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/20/2010 6:36:00 AM

Stunning image Gerard.. All the best for the contest ~ Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/19/2010 7:59:00 PM

Beautiful image, Gerard. If you take "and" out of the last line and separate the other two words with a comma, you'll have the syllable count Linda's looking for. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn