Krish Radhakrishna Poet Senryu

Wedding Vows

he plucked a red rose,
kissed her lips and held her close,
Xmas wedding vows!


3rd placement
Brian Strand sponsor
written 24/12/2020
sencleri limoku poetry contest

5,7,5 syllables

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Sara Kendrick January 1, 2021 at 4:37 AM Ahhh!! A life full of Joy is on his list. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Jo Chamberlain January 1, 2021 at 3:30 AM How lovely. You can't go wrong with a rose. Congratulations on your winning placement. Happy New Year. Krish Radhakrishna January 1, 2021 at 3:33 AM Thank you Joanna! Good wishes and heavens blessings to you on this new year day!!

Darlene De Beaulieu December 24, 2020 at 11:46 AM Hello Krish, I love the theme of this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. merry Christmas. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu December 26, 2020 at 3:05 PM Hello Krish, I had a good Christmas. I hope that you did to. It snowed on Christmas Eve and stayed on the ground. Enjoy your evening my friend. Krish Radhakrishna December 24, 2020 at 12:15 PM Darlene Thank you my dear! Have a wonderful Christmas yourself!!!:)

Tom Cunningham December 24, 2020 at 1:35 AM A lovely image Krish, merry Christmas Tom Krish Radhakrishna December 24, 2020 at 4:20 AM Thanks dear Tom!!! Merry Christmas to you and your family!