Wedding Visitors

visitors arrive
during Chicago’s snow storm—
warm fire inside

the Florida-boy 
wearing short sleeves and jeans—
snow angels

mother and father 
shouting, “Wear your jacket”—
pneumonia

ice on the front steps
beneath foot long icicles—
handrails

the oldest son
cooking jambalaya—
guests inhale deeply

the step-mother
staring outside from upstairs—
snow drifts

children and sleigh bells
laughing as they speed down hill—
sudden stop

The New Orleans Saints
playing on her wedding day—
Cajuns watch

the wedding party
lining up for their entrance—
the Saints won

© December 9, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

FORM:  Haiku Series
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 22, 2012 at 12:03 AM
Dane, Congratulations, in Matt's wonderful contest. Have a great one, always & forever PD
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January 20, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Wonderful, congratulations on you big win, Greg
Poet Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your win with this beautiful haiku series.Enjoyed the read.
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Matt's "Anything" contest Dane Ann. Love,Carol
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January 19, 2012 at 8:48 PM
WAY to go with this great win. I do remember this lovely set. Congratulations, DAne Ann.
Caliri Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Congrats on 4th place in my "Anything" contest! Saints were an unfair topic...I love the Saints...and new orleans (hometown)...
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:34 AM
LIke many cute vignettes of winter and wedding days! HOpe you are enjoying the season and doing well!
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Keep writing and sharing your always amazing poetry and I will keep reading and enjoying it Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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