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Wedding Rehearsal

Preacher, flowers, dresses, cake Husband, wife, bouquets, music Maid of Honor, Best Man, rings Rehearsal dinner Ill-fitting tux, bad weather Parents, in-laws arguing Photographer a no-show Should have just eloped By: Shani Fassbender

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 10:25:00 PM

This one is so cool!! Congratulations on a very well deserved win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/17/2011 5:27:00 PM

LOL My wedding was a kinda dud too! My Mom almost didn't get there, on purpose! Then SHE danced the first dance?? Then the groom went and got stoned in the parking lot??? with my brother?? YUP and when we got to the Plaza in NY the door to our room would not open [think I can't take a hint???] had to get a locksmith in? Congrad's Shay NEE

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2011 5:21:00 PM

Shani! Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 1:57:00 PM

Shani, Congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 1:09:00 PM

Congrats Shani on your amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem luv.. enjoy another treasured win and u are very welcome for the blog acknowledgment today . u earned this my friend for quality poetry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Shani. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Shani

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 8:42:00 PM

Shani, lol.. yes sounds perfect and expensive.... I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/23/2011 6:22:00 PM

The first verse is serious, but the second one made me laugh, Shani! People should save themselves the hassle of weddings and consider eloping. LOL Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2011 6:01:00 PM

wonderful humor here. I love it.